I like how you designed your slides, everything is so easy to read! I like the information you chose as well, I didn't know that coconut husking was a job! I think some more pictures would really make the slides look extra good. Whaea Aria
hi Vera it is me nana Margret i had a nosy at your work like you asked i really enjoyed the brightness you put into this and the expiring things you have learnt i think you are better managed at school then you are at your and the whanou's whare's please show your teacher my comment love you my honey.
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Hi Vera,
ReplyDeleteI like how you designed your slides, everything is so easy to read! I like the information you chose as well, I didn't know that coconut husking was a job! I think some more pictures would really make the slides look extra good.
Whaea Aria
Thank you whaea aria for commenting on my post and next time i would add more pictures.
DeleteHi Vera I like your color and I like that the slides moved and that they did't spin like me but it still looks good it was perfect
ReplyDeletehi Vera it is me nana Margret i had a nosy at your work like you asked i really enjoyed the brightness you put into this and the expiring things you have learnt i think you are better managed at school then you are at your and the whanou's whare's please show your teacher my comment love you my honey.
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